Follow Up on a Proposal Without Asking for Thoughts
A proposal creates a decision task for the buyer. Asking for thoughts is broad enough that a busy person can postpone the reply indefinitely.
Read the signal
The buyer may need to validate scope, compare alternatives, secure funds, or negotiate terms. You can help only if you know which step is underway. Ideally, the review date and decision participants were agreed before the proposal was sent.
Make the next move
Follow up against that agreed process. Ask whether the stated decision meeting happened and which section requires clarification. If there was no process, offer to review the assumptions and invite corrections rather than asking for an immediate yes.
Language you can adapt
Illustrative wording:
You planned to review the proposal with finance on Tuesday. Did the scope and payment terms give them enough to decide, or is there a question I should answer?
The wording is a starting point. Replace the problem, evidence, and request with details the buyer actually gave you. If those details are missing, ask a question before sending a polished message. Specificity makes it easier for the buyer to correct your understanding and easier for you to see whether the opportunity is moving.
Decide what happens next
A request for revisions is progress only if it is tied to an owner and next review. If the buyer cannot identify who is assessing the proposal, revisit qualification before forecasting a close.
Write the result in your deal notes as an observable fact: who responded, what they agreed to do, and when. A friendly reply is useful, but a decision, a named owner, or a scheduled review tells you more. If the next step remains vague, treat that as information about the deal rather than a reason to send the same follow-up again.
Use these examples responsibly. Describe your product, pricing, and customer results accurately, and adapt every suggestion to the buyer’s stated process.